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19 May 2008 @ 05:30 pm
Beautiful You Ch. 4  
Title: Beautiful You
Length: 4/5
Author: jaedonluv
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance
Summary: Yunho has a huge crush on Jaejoong who wants nothing to do with him.
Disclaimer: I don't own them.. If I did, i wouldn't even bother writing this.


With some help, I managed to find out where Jaejoong lived. Everyday, I went there and just watched. I heard his siblings (I found out that their names were Yuna and Jungsu) squabbling over kimchi and then suddenly, they would laugh cutely (and loudly). Then after dinner, I heard their mom tell them to prepare themselves for bed and keep quiet because their brother was studying.

When I first heard that he was ‘studying’, I was a bit suspicious. So I climbed the tree next to his bedroom window and peeked in, without being seen of course. And yes, he was studying. I was really happy that the rumors weren’t true and also felt guilty for thinking otherwise.


“Hey, did you know? Jaejoong was the top for the midterms.” I heard Heechul say to his friends.

I chuckled to myself, happy. Of course he’ll be the top after all that studying. I felt proud of him ^_^

“Ah! Did he sleep with the teacher again?”


My eyes snapped open in a flash. At that moment, all I could see was red.

“WHAT THE HELL?!” I stood up so quickly causing my chair to fall down and make an extremely loud bang.


“Yu.. Yunho!?” They looked at me surprised and also with fear.

“Do you know that Jaejoong stays up late every night studying really hard? Unlike you guys fooling around.”

“HEY! Now that’s just..”

The rest of his sentence was lost to me. There, standing in the classroom’s entrance was Jaejoong. He looked angry… at me.



“It’s almost refreshing to see someone who’s as much of an idiot as you are.”

“Leave me alone, Min” I said gloomily. I’d just showed my stalker-tendencies in front of him!

“Oh really? Well then, I have work to do.” Changmin said indifferently, turning to leave. “I have a date after this as well.”

“HAVE YOU NO HEART?! You could at least try to cheer me up, you know!” I crossed my arms and pouted. How could he treat me like this? I AM his hyung after all.

He shrugged. “Didn’t you want to be left alone? Go console yourself on the roof or something.”

And that’s just what I did.


“Hmph! He’s not human! In the end, that’s all guy friends are good for.” I grumbled to myself while climbing the stair to the rooftop.

I sighed and opened the door.


There, in front of me, sleeping with his legs outstretched and a tired expression on his face, was Jaejoong.

Silently, I walked towards the sleeping beauty and knelt down beside him. Careful not to disturb him, I leaned closer and gazed upon his face.

Wahh.. such long eyelashes and fair skin.. his lips look so..

My face flushed, embarrassed by my thoughts. But I couldn’t help it and unintentionally, I leaned closer to bring our lips together. I could hear my heart beat faster and louder as I got nearer and nearer.


Jaejoong opened his eyes and stared at me, surprised at our close proximity.

“Ah!” I moved back sharply. “I-I-I-I wasn’t trying to kiss you or rape you or anything like that!! I ju-just…”

He looked dazed from his sleep. “…You again?”

“I… I’M SORRY!!” I bowed down low.

Startled by my sudden action, he kept silent.

“Um, I really didn’t mean to stalk you, but I’d be thinking of you and then take a walk, and every day I somehow end up at your house and…I’m really so…” I sniffled.


Eh? I looked up. Did he just laugh?

“Ha… Ha ha.” He covered his mouth, his eyes lighting up in laughter.

After minutes of continuous laughter, he finally removed his hand from his mouth and said with a smile, “You’re funny.”

Jaejoong… smiled at me!

I felt so much happiness at that moment that I started to cry. Because of this, he was shocked.

“What… What are you crying for?!”

“I’m… so happy… You smiled!”


Sniffling, I confessed again. “I… I really like you!”

He blushed.

“When I’m asleep, or when I’m awake… I’m always thinking of you.”

He blushed again. This time, his ears accompanied his face and turned pink.

“Sto… Stop that. It’s embarrassing…”


“S-Someone like you should have someone better than me. Why me? Besides, I’m a guy!”

I ignored the last part. “I like you. I want to see you smile more. I know you’ve been working really hard and—ah! S-sorry, that’s not something a stalker should be saying…”

“I don’t have any friends… and people say I’ve been sleeping with the teacher. I’m not worth it.” He said bitterly, looking down at his hands.

“But that’s just a rumor! Don’t worry about it! If someone says that again, I’ll beat them up for you!! So…” I stopped.

Tears were slowly dripping down his face.

“You really are an idiot.” He rubbed his eyes (cutely).


“That’s the first time… someone’s said that to me…” He tried to wipe away his tears but failed.

I reached for him.

“Don’t… don’t cry… Jaejoong.”

Jaejoong has always been putting up with this all by himself. He’s been ignoring everything and pushing himself.

I held his face gently and leaned forward. Slowly, I closed the distance between our lips and kissed him.

“I’ll protect you from now on…”

A/N: *gasp* Yunho kissed Jae!! What will happen next? Will Jaejoong accept him? Or will he get rejected again?
So here's Chapter 4, how was it? I didn't update for like 3 days so I made it longer than usual^^ In the next chapter, you'll see my miserable attempt at writing... smut -_-"

Current Mood: accomplishedaccomplished
Current Music: DBSK - Yakkusoku
crazyoverbishiecrazyoverbishie on May 19th, 2008 02:20 pm (UTC)
aarrghhh...update..^^v gotta read..^O^
crazyoverbishie: sexy >.< princecrazyoverbishie on May 19th, 2008 02:23 pm (UTC)
awwwweeee...this is sooo good...yunho is really sensitive bout JJ...
the end was sooo sweet...yunho kissed JJ...arrggggghh...cant wait for the smut..^^V

pls do write more...ill be waiting for another great chapter^^v

O.o 1st??
Jaedonjaedonluv on May 19th, 2008 02:39 pm (UTC)
Teehee I'm really happy you liked it^^
Oh about the smut, here's a warning: it's gonna be terrible, a complete disaster -_-
it's my first smut after all ^^,"

Thanks for reading and commenting!! ♥
crazyoverbishie: Super Junsucrazyoverbishie on May 19th, 2008 02:47 pm (UTC)
i read the warning,,,^^v

but im sure that you will do your best...^O^...
good luck with ur 1st smut...^^v
My Obsession, My Love, My  YunJaemoon1084 on May 19th, 2008 02:37 pm (UTC)
gaaaaaaaah so cute
~♥Hope to the End. Always Keep the Faith♥~chloe1910 on May 19th, 2008 03:33 pm (UTC)
Yay! Finally Yunho confesses his feelings and stood up for Jae in front of everyone!!!!!!

I hope Jae will accept him though..
detskiedetskie on May 19th, 2008 03:39 pm (UTC)
thanks for sharing...but this is a cliffie...wahhhhhhhhh...why stop there??? i want to know jae's reaction to the kiss !!!
wintersplashwintersplash on May 19th, 2008 04:30 pm (UTC)
ooh...i feel all tingly inside!!!!!!!!!yunho is fast!!! he finally kissed jae!!!!!
what will happen next????update soon!
asuka2507asuka2507 on May 19th, 2008 06:50 pm (UTC)
loving it... i love ur icon... soooo~ erotic in different POV... XD
twiglet71twiglet71 on May 19th, 2008 08:22 pm (UTC)
That was a very cute chapter....Love it!!! xxx
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on May 19th, 2008 11:32 pm (UTC)
That was a sweet chapter. Smut in the next chapter? Saving the best for last, eh? *smiles*
peaches00apeaches00a on May 20th, 2008 01:06 am (UTC)
jaejoong smiled at Yunho!!!! SWEET!!!! And can't wait for the smut. HEHE
ara_nieyara_niey on May 21st, 2008 07:49 am (UTC)
oh?i think jae rejected yun at first coz he thought yun was same like the rest who thought he slept with his teacher..tsk..

yay!~yun finally get to kiss jae!teehee~^_____________^
Eddie of Eyorqueen_eddie on January 7th, 2009 12:04 am (UTC)
I was going to start reading this story but I can't find Ch. 5. Did you finish the story?