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15 May 2008 @ 05:22 pm
Beautiful You Ch. 3  
Title: Beautiful You
Length: 3/5
Author: jaedonluv
Rating: PG this part
Genre: Romance
Summary: Yunho has a huge crush on Jaejoong who wants nothing to do with him.
Disclaimer: I don't own them.. If I did, i wouldn't even bother writing this.


… With a teacher? Can it be?

I squeezed my eyes close and shook my head furiously.

No! It’s just a rumor! You know better than to believe that silly rumor, Yunho! If you believe it, then you don’t really love her. Err... him. >.<

After a lot of day-dreaming, thinking, deciding and day-dreaming again, I decided that I’d find out myself… when the time was right.

The next day after school had just ended, I kind of ‘stalked’ Jaejoong, following him from a safe (at least I thought it was safe) distance. However, he somehow managed to sense that someone was following him. Geez, is the intensity of my gaze really that high? … or I just can’t stalk.. -_-”

Jaejoong turned and slowly walked towards me.


He talked to me! He…

“Are you the one who’s been asking about me?” He questioned with a frown.

His words were ignored as inside my mind, my thoughts and feelings were in conflict with each other. Seeing him so close like this…

“…Uh…uhm… uh… I…” I stammered, my face blushing like crazy.


“I… I LOVE YOU!” I confessed, my gaze falling to the ground. I couldn’t look at his face; he was too beautiful for my eyes.

“Is there something wrong with you?”

I looked at him, taken aback. I felt my heart clench painfully. I was sure my hurt, surprise and pain could be seen in my eyes. I tried to smile. He gave me a look and walked away.

Aish… this is painful. But I should be used to this right? After all, I’ve been dumped nine times. … But it hurts so bad. Now that I think about it, my beloved Goddess is actually the God of Destruction; he has broken my heart. What am I thinking? I shouldn’t give up! This is not the Jung Yunho that I know! Come on, Yunho, hwaiting!

I took a deep breath and exhaled loudly.

I could still see him walking (he was about twelve meters away and the street was almost empty). Nevertheless, I continued following him. I don’t know why but my body just moved on its own.

I increased my pace to lessen the distance between us.

“Hyung!” “Oppa!” Two children appeared and ran happily to Jaejoong’s side.

Oh… little siblings?

“Oppa, I came to pick you up!” The girl chirped cutely.

“Hey! I came too!” The little boy pouted, forehead beginning to frown.

“Really? Come on then, let’s go home.” Jaejoong said with a gentle smile and took hold of their hands, his right hand holding the girl’s and his left, the boy’s. Together, they headed home. The children’s laughter could still be heard when they disappeared from sight.

I just stood there; I was mesmerized by his smile. What should I do? I think I’m falling for him even more…


A/N: Nothing much happens here, sorry! Well, Yunho and Jaejoong meet, Yunho gets hurt but doesn't give up (that's why I love him <3), Yunho falls more deeply in love with Jae. How will Yunho get closer to Jae? Will Yunho succeed in getting Jae to love him back? Watch out for the next chapter!^^
Hiya! Thanks for all your comments, guys! They're all ♥. Well, I finally decided that this is gonna be a five-shot thing. This chapter was kinda sad, wasn't it? :( Sorry about that. It was needed. I did say that 'Jaejoong wants nothing to do with him', didn't I? So yeah...
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My Obsession, My Love, My  YunJaemoon1084 on May 15th, 2008 02:09 pm (UTC)
mmeee back to comment
My Obsession, My Love, My  YunJae: yunholovemoon1084 on May 15th, 2008 02:11 pm (UTC)
awww poor yunho! cant wait to see what happens
asuka2507asuka2507 on May 15th, 2008 02:09 pm (UTC)
ur back n very fast...
asuka2507asuka2507 on May 15th, 2008 02:16 pm (UTC)
ahhh yunnie is realli in love wif him... heee~
~♥Hope to the End. Always Keep the Faith♥~chloe1910 on May 15th, 2008 03:57 pm (UTC)
yes! Finally Jae & Yunho meet.. I wonder who;s the little boy and girl..really his siblings?? They sounded really cute here though...

Ah, Poor Yunho, he is falling deeper for jae by the minutes...XD
his.warda ©warda_jaejin on May 15th, 2008 04:44 pm (UTC)

how cn jae do dat to yunho~~

awwwhh~~ >.<

i cnt wait for the next chapter!!!!
update soon yeah~?
irerd_tagairerd_taga on May 15th, 2008 06:28 pm (UTC)
They meet, Yunho blurts out his love and Jae leaves after cracking Yunho's heart. But Yunho is not deterred eh.
Who are those 2 children hanging on to Jae's hands? His siblings?
xkhanxkhan on May 15th, 2008 09:04 pm (UTC)
aw=) n yeah, love at first sight is random especially if someone u dont noe just came up to u n said they love u=p
Quiet_Heartachequiet_heartache on May 15th, 2008 09:21 pm (UTC)
oooo keep this going...
i wonder what yunho will try next XD
*waits for next part*
ara_nieyara_niey on May 16th, 2008 04:32 am (UTC)
aww~poor yun!!*huggles him*
chibiko_pandachibiko_panda on May 17th, 2008 09:09 am (UTC)
hahaha this is so cute XD
lol at that sudden declaration of love from yunho XD
aaand you said you were inspired by a yaoi manga you read. i feel like i read a manga similar to this (i think XD) ^^
anyway update soon :3
crapthatjiggy // Donna XPcrapthatjiggy on October 1st, 2008 03:00 pm (UTC)
jae was fierce for walking away lol ~ XP
and aaawww yunho was dumped again! :o
who are those two kids?:D:D:D
thegaffethegaffe on November 5th, 2008 03:21 am (UTC)
oooh, drama. siblings?