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14 May 2008 @ 05:26 pm
Beautiful You Ch. 1  
Title: Beautiful You
Length: Twoshot/Threeshot
Author: jaedonluv
Pairing: YunJae (Yunho x Jaejoong)
Rating: PG this part
Genre: Romance, Yaoi
Summary: Yunho has a huge crush on Jaejoong who wants nothing to do with him.
Disclaimer: I don't own them.. If I did I wouldn't even bother writing this

A/N: This is my first try at writing a fic so it's not all that. I got the idea from a manga I read a few months ago. It was yaoi. Unfortunately, I've forgetten it's title ^^," I find I made the first chapter a bit short though, but oh well^^

Cambridge Academy. One of the top private schools here in Korea. Even if it was an all-boys school, there wasn’t a guy who had trouble in finding a girlfriend… That, however, is a big lie.

“DAMN YOU, CELIA!” I screamed as I stood on the rooftop of the academy. Just about two minutes ago, I was dumped by my girlfriend. How? Through text message! We had been going out for three months.

I heaved a heavy sigh.

In the three years since I’ve started high school, I’ve been dumped nine times.


The door to the rooftop opened and the most beautiful girl I’d ever seen emerged. She had full, pink lips with skin that looked smooth and fair, her short raven black hair clung to her neck. Her doe-like eyes widened in surprise as she noticed me.

Unconsciously, my mouth parted slightly and a tiny bit of drool trailed down as I gazed at her beauty. She, instead, stared back at me with surprise. I stayed in a trance for five seconds until the ringing of the school bell startled me. Blushing, I ran back into the school leaving her (unwillingly).

For the tenth time since I started high school, I was in love.

A/N: Hehe, so Yunho meets his new love. Who is this girl? Will she return his feelings? What's a girl doing in an all-boys school? You'll find out soon! Haha I sound like a narrator from a TV series or something XD


Current Location: earth
Current Mood: hungryhungry
Current Music: JJ Lin - Saranghaeyo
☆ミ 「Honey Vaniity」honey_vaniity on May 14th, 2008 03:02 pm (UTC)
I love that 'What's a girl doing in an all-boys school?' It's a Jaejoong, not a girl~ This is pretty cute, though, I can't wait to read the last parts of it.
Jaedonjaedonluv on May 14th, 2008 07:03 pm (UTC)
I'm glad that you liked it, I'll try to update as fast as I can! <3
kattan69kattan69 on May 14th, 2008 03:13 pm (UTC)
Of course it is our beautiful Jae. Who else can beat him...none can. So we have a lovestuck Yunho and a reluctant Jae. At least this is different...breaking from the norm where Jae is always the one in love with Yunho and chasing him....I like this. Pls do continue and thanks!
Jaedonjaedonluv on May 14th, 2008 07:06 pm (UTC)
Hehe yes, I agree. Noone can beat Jae, he's too perfect :D
Yea, I saw that in almost all the JaeHo/YunJae fics I've read, it's mostly always Jae who's in love with Yunho and tries to get his attention. So I wanted to try something different and with the help of a manga, I wrote this^^
I'm glad you like it^^
~♥Hope to the End. Always Keep the Faith♥~chloe1910 on May 14th, 2008 04:54 pm (UTC)
aha....I guess the most beautiful "girl" Yunho ever met is Jaejoong...ah duh? Cause this is an all-boy school...it couldn't be a girl right? And by the descriptino, it has to be Jaejoongie right??
~♥Hope to the End. Always Keep the Faith♥~chloe1910 on May 14th, 2008 04:57 pm (UTC)
XD...please update soon!!!
Jaedonjaedonluv on May 14th, 2008 07:07 pm (UTC)
Hehe you'll see if it's Joongie or not^^
Thank you! Yes, I'll update soon. In fact, I've already updated :D
Olesia: YH-BruceLeedongbang_sarang on May 14th, 2008 05:24 pm (UTC)
please continue... i'll never get bored of high school YunJae fics.. they are LOVE!!!
Jaedonjaedonluv on May 14th, 2008 07:07 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to update soon. Actually, I've already updated :D
irerd_tagairerd_taga on May 14th, 2008 05:31 pm (UTC)
Hhhhmmmm wonder who fits that description of the beautiful girl? Why, it must be none other than captivating Jaejoongie!
Yunho's gonna be in for a shock when he finds out his tenth love interest is no girl, but a boy. Hahahaha....
Jaedonjaedonluv on May 14th, 2008 07:09 pm (UTC)
Hehe yes, Joongie is very captivating ne? ^-^
Haha, Yunnie will get the shock of his life when he finds out xD
I'm glad you liked it! <3
detskiedetskie on May 14th, 2008 06:10 pm (UTC)
hahaha...yunho thought jae was a girl???? in love for the 10nth time???

thanks for sharing...will be waiting for the next one <333
Jaedonjaedonluv on May 14th, 2008 07:11 pm (UTC)
Haha yes. Don't people mostly confuse Jae as a girl? Maybe Yunnie was so lovestruck he didn't realise that Jae was a guy^^
Oh yes, the 10th time. Hard to believe isn't it? That a hot guy like Yunnie gets dumped? It was really hard for me to picture this at first but then... xD

I'm glad you liked it! <3
himeno15 on May 14th, 2008 06:52 pm (UTC)
great. wonderful

it's about time people stop writing Jaejoong ALWAYS the one in love with yunho

i am glad u r not following that so called trend

the girl is jae right?
Jaedonjaedonluv on May 14th, 2008 07:13 pm (UTC)
Hehe yea. I wanted to try something different instead of the same thing again.
The girl... well you'll see in the next chapter^^

I'm glad you liked it! ♥
xkhanxkhan on May 14th, 2008 07:18 pm (UTC)
LOL! he thinks Jae's a girl, n wow, Yunho dumped 9 times?? OUCH,YUNHO AH!
Quiet_Heartachequiet_heartache on May 14th, 2008 07:29 pm (UTC)
haha, jaejoong u girl uuuu
nice to see yunnie getting over heartbreak so quickly XD i think jaejoong would bring it out in anyone...
will watch for next parts, sankyuuu
My Obsession, My Love, My  YunJae: hotandsweatyjaemoon1084 on May 14th, 2008 07:54 pm (UTC)
hahahahhaa he thought jae was a girl
asuka2507asuka2507 on May 14th, 2008 09:13 pm (UTC)
love the idea... haha...u do narrate it like on tv... haha~ on to the next part
ara_nieyara_niey on May 14th, 2008 10:55 pm (UTC)
haha~i guess that was jae..keke~
for the 10th time?tsk..

continue please~^___________^
thegaffethegaffe on November 5th, 2008 02:58 am (UTC)
OH HAVE MERCY XDDD i can't stop laughing, Yunho's just so much Phail XDDDD